Does my resume stand a chance?

I appreciate any help and feedback on my resume.

To better explain the information I have redacted, I graduated form a non-target school in Texas, with a degree in Banking & Finance, as indicated. The banking portion of my degree centered around classes and case studies to mirror formal credit training. After graduation, I spent a year out in West Texas at a highly respected Regional bank that has consistently ranked in a top five position, in their asset class. While at that bank I completed a form of formal credit training, although not typical to BB credit training. Currently, I work at a Super-Regional Bank by U.S. measures, but the bank has a large presence in Europe, South America, and offices in Asia. I work as a C&I underwriter for Middle Market and Lower Middle Market borrowers. While working I have completed a part-time MBA, from the same non-target school I obtained my undergrad from. The MBA was inclusive of in-class and on-line courses, with an emphasis in Banking and Financial Institutions.

My goal is to obtain a position as an analyst at PE or IB shops in Houston, preferably PE. My secondary goal is to lateral more to an internal corporate finance position.

 

I wonder if its better to stand out using your own format (granted you keep it sharp and clean)

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Thanks for the response, the format I have is set to mirror the mergers & inquisitions template, with a few adjustments. Could you be more specific about what is throwing you off, or making it look unprofessional? Do you have any issues with the content or key points?

 

I personally think you need a new major section instead of just education and professional experience. I also don't like the way you did your second level of bulleting, that needs to change somehow.

 

You should adjust your resume, add section with skills, hobbits.... Is it common in USA to write target or non target school on your resume? I view this as shooting yourself in the foot

 
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You should adjust your resume, add section with skills, hobbits....
Is it common in USA to write target or non target school on your resume?
I view this as shooting yourself in the foot

The hobbit section is pretty much all I look at when I screen resumes.

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