RESUME CRITIQUE: Graduating university, looking into management consulting jobs - have at it!

Hi everyone, please critique my resume for an entry-level consulting job. I know that there are some items on there that are unconventional, but that is because I am pursuing a job in the Middle East, where that is common. For example, the big circle on the top left usually contains a picture of me. The CV is anonymous for obvious reasons.

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1) Not needed but any results from your 3-yearexport strategy? 2) I have never seen the left hand border, wont comment on that but I don't think fragrances is something others will really bond with; if it's to specify an industry I'd make it more general.

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1) No, since it was the strategy for 2018-2020. 2) Fragrances as in perfumes, would that be a better term?

Thanks for your reply!

 

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